this just made my day
of all the horrible things i've sen in my life, you is seriusly struggling among the worst of all time. its so bad, it evens feels like you made it look bad on purpose, wich is clearly not the case.
instead of putting yourself on shame, i do recomend you to work way more on your drawings, story, plot, on basically EVERYTHING. as it is now, i'd really hate to see you believing that you did something good, wich you didn't.
if anything positive could ever be said of this, is that everyone starts with something. at leats, i'd just believe that getting this horrible abomination of crap destroyed and humilliated to its lowest posible rating will encourage you to re evaluate your work and put way more effort in your submissions.
the animations is poor, the fights are sadly bad produced, and the story itself need a lot of improvements. needs a lot more work to have a more decent score.
you needed 4 days to do this?
just for some lines and sounds? it doesn't speak good of you son.
anyway, maybe you can add some background sounds, to make it even more "unexpected ending"-ish
in fact, it make me smile... strange, i know.. it's an strange mix between a very simple child-like animation(like those that appear in discovery kids or something like that) and an strange animation...
well.. i like it. so that's why i'll give it a 4. it's not perfect, rigth, but maybe it doesn't need anything else.
ok, it's poetry, and it's a slideshow of images blah blah.. for your friends blah blah and was made in a sec blah blah...
now ask yourself: does that worry someone here on newgrounds?
uhm. i dont knw. does it? maybe. anywayz i dnt rili care if it worries someone or not. (even if you mean me) haha! Who0o0o0o0o0!
a good example of a simple yet Funny spoof
it got my 5, so feel proud of it.
(and thanks for not using sticks on it)
dont even get me started on stick animations!!! im sure the artists that made sticks and are good at animating them, could at least add some meat on to the structured figure.
and i am proud! :D
wanna upload an amv?
then o to yotube, not here.
interesting trailer, by the way
hope we could see this movie soon...
sice i hate stick movies, the sole idea of see an "adolf-stick"...
just waiting the flash to be loaded
in order to blam it.
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